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life 1 min read 549 views Dec 20, 2015

Strike back

drop the lazer
I'm already stunned
and shell shocked
time never cease
and war don't stop
bit by a viper
looking like a sniper
Danny Boys a piper
Israelite's are gripers
true, they complained
through the whole thing
we're in a war, that
can't be explained
how are we suppose to
take all this pain
do we dive, or do we swing
if we do, the sweet chariot
will be coming forth
to carry us home
or we safe in our home
hell no, guard the doors
America is guilty of whoring
and God hates whores
we must, pray, he likes us a lot
like Noah and Lot
you know, what's up
don't act like you're shocked
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