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life 1 min read 624 views Dec 20, 2015

Dollhouse

the little girl who beats her doll

with a brush, must be in a rush

to be a bad parent, apparently, she's

crying out for help but, everyone

thinks it's cute, now she's taking off

her shoe, I wonder what

she's going to do, what did

that poor dolly do, to endure

and sustain, so much pain

her abuse must be true

pay attention to what she do

she's looking up, trying to 

get attention from you

what you gonna do, you're

a witness to a crying girls world

she starts to cry, when you

tell her big brother to, take her

to the bathroom, she's to scared

to tell you, what happened in the stall

he told her that you would whoop her

so she don't tell you at all, about

what happened, when she fell

tell me, did she really fall

you're a failure of a mother

so before we go, any further

I had to make the call

 

 

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2b2b2

Tight Write....such truth always cuts like a knife....thanks for sharing!

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