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life 1 min read 543 views Dec 25, 2015

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the pain didn't stop because it's Christmas
it just chilled out, but when the ice melts
we still feel, like the world has fell on us
we are in need of help, but who can we trust
we must, help ourselves no matter what it
takes we just have to wake and think
until we have a solution too solidified
to break, we must lay a foundation down
before it's too late, as if too late is now
we are not safe, so brace yourself
this is not a test of the emergency broadcast system

this is a shock to the system, we are 
under attack, those who look back too long
are already gone, so leave them alone
do not spare the oil and do not spill the wine
go to your house and make some Brine
there's hypnotic in pine, too much shine
will visibly impair you blind, renew your mind

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