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life 1 min read 564 views Dec 25, 2015

sting

you make it mellow
I'm so comfortable
drifting off to wonderland
wondering and wandering
along the gravel paved path
I fall and I don't get a scratch
my eyes are closed but, I'm not sleeping
away one moment of your time spent with me
I wonder are you listening, your attention
is required, in order for me to get 
my point across to you, you're like
an ocean sometimes impassable 
sometimes you make it impossible 
I'm no chemist but, I know when 
the formula has been changed 
or tampered with, all it takes is a whiff
I remember the strong aroma
that wooed me, so seductively
but, now you're playing, hide and seek
so I play my role like I can't find you
as if I'm so weak, I let you speak
you draw me me in like I'm a cartoon
in your comic script, so color me in
into your world of entertainment
I'll be your puppet, no strings attached
you think I'm a fool but, I'm too smart for that
song and dance, oh how I love
how you sing, is it me or has
your voice changed

 

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