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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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father bless me where I stand
touch me where it hurts
"you know, I'm not going to church

the last time, I was there
I couldn't find you anywhere
not in the pulpit, not in the choir stand
no where in the pews

the pastor preached prosperity
but, where was the, good news
he was the only one wearing new shoes

father bless me, where I stand
fix in me what use to work
"you know, I'm not going to church"

the words are watered down
with a chase, I went in hungry and I
left with a taste of cracker meal

blessed are those who keeps it
real, "you know how, I feel

 

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Beautiful implications says:

Very deep in so many ways true to all who really understands the words u say very beautifully written enjoyed every minute reading this🤗

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Beautiful implications says:

Very deep in so many ways true to all who really understands the words u say very beautifully written enjoyed every minute reading this🤗

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