“In the clouds”

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life 1 min read 709 views Dec 27, 2015

The break up

i know it hurts you

cause it hurts me

crazy as it sounds

i think its suppose to

you know me and i know you

our souls bleed

you tell me

are they suppose to

im scared and i feel alone

trapped with concrete walls closing in

posing as a macho man

for my last 60 seconds on this continent

laying in the fetal is too weak

refuse being used as a muse

or looked upon as a mule

its over baby you lost out

dont worry i dont toss out

you keep my place

while i bury my face

in a cup at a bar to numb

what you've just torn apart my heart

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mrmelody7

very well expressed easiy understood

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