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life 1 min read 551 views Jan 1, 2016

Pitfall

never get involved with a friend
that kind of involvement
will do you in
nobody wins in the end
you'l windup feeling dumped
without no one to 
talk about it to
who would listen
who would console and
give good counsel
it's being stuck out on
a weak limb and help is
out of your reach
though you may stay inside
attempting to hide
nothing can change
how you're feeling inside
you lie about how you feel
and at the same time 
try not to cry
knowing you crossed the line
and made a big mistake
only time can break
the thickness, between
the two of you
she told you to, go and do you
though, you don't truthfully
know, what that means
coming from her, it sounds
so cruel and mean
left with nothing to do, except, go away 
licking your, self inflicted wounds

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