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hope Pt. II

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I hope you let them know they were no weaker

I hope you were a focused sailor

I hope you werent bought So I hope you didn't become a seller

I hope you were seen as an equal rather than a competitor

I hope because of you some one went further

I hope you had your own But never said I'm better

I hope you could count more laughter than grief and burden

I hope you made proud your late father

Saw the smile on your mother

I hope you don't make more than you can gather

I hope your life wasn't just made of paper

I hope your growth was to be lighter not paler

I hope you didnt find your purpose from the palm reader

But beneath the flesh, you recognize the hands of the writer

 

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

This is so good, 1

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ElroyKen says:

I hear U. Good write

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Tru Sista says:

great

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