“In the clouds”

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life 1 min read 460 views Jan 13, 2016

Thursday, "The Party"

The sun is down

just not quite dark yet

Such a perfect atmosphere

Ladies and gentlemen raise thier glasses in the in air

Everyone stands 

Ladies grab their man

Then proceed to the floor to dance

The DJ does a scratch and spin

universal love is whats happening 

The muggs is gone

people getting they kiss and huggs on

no love songs

but love is whats going on

The moonlinght arrives

and shines that light 

its not as bright

just more magical

And the woman im with

is not just your average  girl

We set the night on fire

Soak our attire with sweat

Small party

i can hear her heartbeat

she stares at me

tickles my hand

flashes a smile

now i wana be more than friends

Shes got that beauty 

you hold the door for

even if you cant dance

you'll go hit the floor for her

If you bands aint right

You'll grind double time for her

Looking in her eyes on this night lit by moonlight

She said do you wana go

I said where you wana go

She said my place

I said ok

And we where were gone

.....TO BE CONTINUED

 

 

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RonnieL

Feel this...nice flow to this one

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