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life 1 min read 869 views Jan 17, 2016

Thoughts of a Dying Breed

I look up to the sky. God is that you? Is this the wrath that every Christian goes through? Being beaten til I'm bloody, black and blue? By the ones sent to protect and serve? Then left stranded to die on a curb? Is this the life God's planned for me? Is this my legacy???? I did jack that Impala last week.... Is this Karma out to get me? Is this meant to bring me to my knees? Is this a lesson being taught to my community? The ones who say *** the police? The kids who play in the streets? Everyone who looks like me??? Nah, this is an act of man. The ones who hate anything too tanned. The ones who scream “guilty!” at the stand. Without even givin a brotha a chance. As my heartbeat slows, my day turns to night at the blink of an eye...Graduation, marriage, family trips at the beach. If they had stopped beating me, it could all have been reached.

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Cjsmom

This is a black man's journey through time...lately, that journey ends before it truly begins in our community. So here is something my heart feels may be a reflection of the final thoughts of a young black man as he takes his last breaths....

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The Immortal Wize

Too Deep!

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Cjsmom

Thank you for reading my thoughts. Enjoy your day!

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hymnagen

Pen that truth, sista. Pen that truth! Seen enough; adding you to my short list, poetess, Peace

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Cjsmom

Thank you. This piece means a lot as I have two young black sons. Hope is still on the horizon. Much love!

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2b2b2

TIGHT PIECE....BRAVO!!!

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Cjsmom

Thank you. Hoping for change.

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Poetiq1der

Peace and God''s Blessings to you and yours...An awesomely thought out and written piece of Art...

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WarriorCarryingWater

Real Talk

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