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Suffering

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Oh, but like a dandelion, dancing in the wind,

The pieces of me are falling apart from within..

My mind can’t comprehend, as my soul begins to descend,

that my heart will befriend this melancholy ascend....

Oh, but like a dandelion, transcending in the wind,

like all things, this too will come to an end.

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Beautiful capture.. Thanks for sharing.
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The Immortal Wize says:

Love it!

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LP45 says:

Excellent write Cjsmom. Thanks for sharing.
 

love_supreme says:

Very nice. Loved it.

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mlowe5 says:

Cjsmom770, thanks for sharing beautiful imaging rhythmic flowing write with its powerful message. Lit up my senses! Read it twice. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
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2b2b2 says:

BEAU-tiful....TIGHT....thanks for sharing!!

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