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life 1 min read 666 views Jan 17, 2016

The Real World

 

Look at the backdrop.

Watch as the infant's eyes drift.

My soul weeps for you.

 

  *A haiku is a Japanese style of poetry consisting of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world from love to nature.

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Cjsmom

The purpose of this piece is to give you the vision of a mother holding her infant as she shields it from the real world, only to weep in sadness for the inevitable. Hopefully you guys can see that in only 17 syllables!!!

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love_supreme

Wow, this is nice.

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Cjsmom

Thank you!

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love_supreme

Very nice

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