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just different 1 min read 690 views Jan 25, 2016

When Snow Came To Waltz

 

 When Snow Came To Waltz

Like animated dancing silhouettes

Stilled in time—

Caged on all sides by the chilling whiteness,

We waited in frozen

 Hope.

 

The sun had abandoned us, leaving

Only a faint reflection;

What could he do anyway?  All

Is like a maximum security of nature

Lock down.

 

Struggling with itself, the human spirit

Grows—grows

Wearily weird with wanton wrath—

Warning unheeded.

 

Bending knees cringed

In once forgotten prayers—searching;

Howling winds and chilled waxed ears listened.

Void answers.

 

Whispering fires wane and beg with hunger; but

The wood cupboard has gone bare—and electricity?

She ran away and hid in the bitter dark!

 

As promised, blizzard waltz in and sat quietly.

With stoic patience, she waited to dance and go her way.

But our fuel dance cards had turned to cold ashes.

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Poetiq1der

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours....You are a fabulous writer, and I loved the alliteration....Respect

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mlowe5

Thanks my Brother! Much blessings to you and yours also. May The Most High continue to delight and dwell with you all. One Love, Brother M. Lowe

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Thanks for the SNAPS, love_supreme. Much appreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5.

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