“Drifting On a memory”

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just different 1 min read 647 views Jan 27, 2016

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When I runaway in my mind, I run away to a place where ain't no weeping, worries, or stress...everything's that pure & beautiful, I already possess. The music carries me like the wind with a kite, & life's already copestetic , I don't have to put up a fight.... The stars at night, ...they shine & twinkle like diamonds cut from a princess or a Queen..The days are long & sweet like a dream... The grass is always greener, flowers always smell sweeter....there's little space for a misdemeanor, kuz everybody lives life a whole lot cleaner.... But I wonder if heaven.... If heaven had a place here on earth, if I could change my address & start all the way over from birth...New life, it would be a whole new world...I wouldn't know the meaning of an American Girl....I would be an Angel living in heaven , here on earth.... An Earth Angel rebirthed

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Corey

An ability to step away from stress or whatnots of our life, even if for only a moment can be a wonderful coping mechanism. I certainly can relate to this...thanks for sharing.

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mrmelody7

Very nicely expressed keep at it

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igotastory

your words are like me listening to my favorite song ,you totally feel what i feel

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RonnieL

like the flow of this piece....nice write!

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jtj1982

WOW!!! It is not difficult to immerse myself in the imagery that your words create. Even more there was a congruent and consistent flow to your writing. This was FLAWLESS!!! It was like skating on clear ice...smooth!!!

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