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life 1 min read 752 views Jan 28, 2016

Flight of the Wish (upon a Wisp)

Whispers  manifest  slowly

Carried  by  hushed  gusts

Ever  so  politely  carrying  views

 

Unimpeded  via  timeless  waves  n’  rhythms

Spreading  silent gospel  choral  symphonies 

Returning  to   heights  of  eternal  pristinely  hues

 

Witnesses’  gaze  and  admire  its  know

Often pondering   through   dreamers   to  realities

Traveling   assuredly  along   its   currents’  of   promise

 

Quickening  most  suddenly,  just  within  grasps

Fleeting  past  casual  observers,  per  chance

Lifting  up  focus  onto  divine  arrangements   at  play

 

Preordained,   yet  maintained  quite  casually

Over  riverbeds,  serene  meadows  and  past  pristine  peaks

Destination  is  determined  by  a  heart’s  desired  reach

 

On  such  ethereal  realms,  benevolence  is  set  free

Carrying  liberty  on  swift  gale  fused  delivery

Sons  and  Daughters  give  chase,  hoping  to  place,

Wishes  based  off  redeeming  GOD’s  Grace

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mrmelody7

Always got it together love a poet who sees the big picture of the world dont have to always b bout you. always refreshen to read your work number one commenttator

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Poetiq1der

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours....Awesomely penned! 1 Love

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2b2b2

Thank you kindly mr melody for these kind and enriching comments...Always Much Appreciation...Namaste

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2b2b2

Thanks Poetiq1der, same onto you Brother...One

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LP45

Another great piece of work my friend! Superb in deed, Thank you for sharing this.

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