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life 1 min read 402 views Feb 11, 2016

Floating on a cloud


Floating on a cloud
 
When we first met, you took my breath away 
you kept my body numb, my mind drifted to you everyday
took my mind to places never before seen by my sight
my body wanted you every night
 
Our encounters started out few and far in between
Which left me craving you like a fiend 
long spans of time being apart
Was I thinking with my mind or with my heart
 
Rewarding, intensifying the sensation
the force of this strong elevation
More and more each time
I have continued to deny
 
I open myself surrendering my mind completely to you 
Neglecting the world without having a clue
On a floating cloud is where I am left
stripping away my conscience and breath
 
As the clock's hands move forward 
Sensation has become awkward 
time seems to drift in your presence 
more dreary less of an essence
 
My imagination has gone to places I'd prefer not travel 
getting away is like a losing battle
I make excuses to keep you near
the throught of being without you leaves me in fear
Marijuana my addiction to you is clear
 
 

 

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2b2b2

Tight Flip in this Work, thanks for sharing....Bravo....ONE

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Corey

Hello Lifewriter, You got me...I thought it was about a person or should I say, 2 people. The interesting thing is, I can't relate on the level of drugs, but kicking the habit of my ex was so similar...anyhoo, I enjoyed this. Thanks!

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love_supreme

Very nice

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