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Corey says: Sometimes throughout our youth others can instill certain emotions in us that make life difficult as we grow older. Based on your poem you have identified the problem. The next step is to focus on engaging in things and people who only offer positive impact. I say this because I used to have an issue with fear of stepping outside my comfort zone. Sorry, I didn't mean to run on, but your piece touched me soul deep. Nice write, tfs! |
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Poetunleashed says: Thank you for those kind words and im glad it resonated with you |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY poetunleashed
Hindsight is 20/20Looking back, For love’s goggles For my judgement Distance washed my eyes clean; A monster’s gaze I ponder: For I bled for you, But to you, |
Masks FallMasks Fall Pretense wavers for greed tires of playing hide-and-seek. Like a serpent, it lies in wait, striking when hunger reaches boiling point. Your malice undresses, refusing to be confined up under layers of kindness. Like nudists suffocated by garments, layer by layer, stripped away by time, your fangs finally find their freedom. |
beneath the scarsWe bear scars We bear scars We bear scars. |
toward no coordinateA single step taken, A journey begins, One accompanied by tests.
Without a single page revised, A journey enshrined In vines of thorns, Which carry lessons with each prick.
Still, another step is taken, And another.
Each callus gained Becomes a check mark Of each lesson earned.
As lessons accumulate, They bond themselves within an aging soul.
The journey continues, step by step, Toward a destination containing no coordinate, Yet drawing the soul to it.
A magnetism so strong That each step in the wrong direction Is met with a pull So harsh that the body rattles In its effort to correct its course. |
the eternal masterMortals, Bound |
mortals on borrowed timeAngels reside among clouds, watching mortals scurry about, living on borrowed time. |
Betrayal lingersAmong an ocean of memories, your betrayal surfaces often. A stain in pristine waters, it lingers, refusing to disintegrate into nothingness. Its presence arises with questions, what-ifs whose answers shall never come, for they reside in timelines I never lived through. |
love beyond realmsI walk not alone. I walk not alone. I walk not alone, |
No ReprieveHeavy Heart Bears all, What it carries Each moment Congested mind, Formless though they may be, Body running empty, All signals blurring red, |
A prayer for my little starA solemn prayer nests May you shine brightly. May our bond never be severed, May my eyes shut for eternity |