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life 1 min read 687 views Feb 19, 2016

Happiness the pursuit part 2

 
 
Obstiles rise
 
They promise our demise

Bringing pain and misery

Their objective isnt a mistery

To hault our success

With no compromise

These obsticles i truly despise

Obsticles and barriers alike

Trying to hault my pursuit

The perfect chase

 A race for lifes sweet embrace

Happiness a pursuit

No obsticle can prevent me

From achieving

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Charles2

Great focus. Damn the obstacles, full speed ahead

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