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life 1 min read 634 views Feb 29, 2016

Winter Knowledge

Ice and snow bring a harsh winter knowledge

The blade of grass performs a crunch under foot

Ice - preserves new life and quenches the past 

White of the season purifying or so it seems

Bundle up or catch your death 

 

Much dies under this blanket of cold

Understanding is hard to behold

 

The winter winds has no care 

 

continue on 

life renews

The beauty of a dying season

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hymnagen

I'm really feeling this imagery. Nicely done

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SMusinga

Wow, Just wow, I am stunned. I loved it. Very nicely written. Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job. Keep up the outstanding work.

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