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life 2 min read 482 views Mar 2, 2016

MY SUCCESS YOU HATE

You have seen me cry 
Still you stand there and do nothing 
You have seen me struggle 
Struggle to lift myself off the ground
Seen me wallow in despair 
Seen the pain written on my face 
Seen me fight death 
Trying to flee this place 
Yet you are adamant to do nothing 
You simply wait for me to rise 
For me to fight my demise 
And when I stand tall 
Proclaiming victory in this battle 
You circle like vultures 
Waiting to feed 
Yet you are blind when I bleed
Deaf when I am in need 
What have I done to you? 
Is this revenge for the hurt 
I have caused you maybe  
Is this simply you hating 
That I am trying to succeed 
Do you fear so much 
That I will prosper 
Do you wallow at the thought 
Of seeing me victorious 
Over my trails and tribulations 
Why do you hate me so? 
You have witnessed my struggle 
And felt my pain, seen my tears 
Witness my knees buckle 
From the pressures of life 
Yet I still have to endure 
Your constant chastising
Are you amused 
When you see me fall
Do you derive pleasure 
In seeing me on the ground
Defeated, lifeless and dying 
Answer me 
To stop these questions 
That fill my mind 
Put your pride aside 
And open your mouth 
And answer me this 
Do you hate seeing me succeed 

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