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Mellow
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I would whisper words in you ear

But the ashes burnt my throat

It gets to you before I could make it clear

Have been hurting here

Tell me something are you better there?

Haven't found anybody around me that wills to bare

Please tell me I still have a place in you dear

I wanna run and hug you As you take off my fear

Am I asking too much, its no fair

Nude me down

slow my feet Take a step

stop the beat

I need your air in me deep

I want to go back Can't take no more of the defeat

Tried to make it better with nicotine and the tree

But they keep on leaving me

Filled with some scars I can't see

Just come over set me free

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2b2b2 says:

TIGHT!!!
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Kewayne Wadley says:

Nicely written! I love it's subtle rawness

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