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life 1 min read 595 views Mar 17, 2016

drowning words

Drown in my own tears

speaking kindness

 

rejected

 

silence of my words

spoken never heard

 

general topics in this conversation

small  minds never understood

 

complications

result from lack of listening

 

Tears breaking open wounds

 

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bekz580

very nice!

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