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life 1 min read 588 views Mar 20, 2016

Cutting through

You're stuck between

Here and there

I can't feel your vibe

Check my pressure, see if I'm 

Still alive, you treat me like

I'm dead sometimes

Walking across my bed

Sitting on the pillow, where

I have to lay down my head

Tell me, or you here or there

I need to know so, I can go somewhere

I really do care but all my life

I had to cope

It was a hell of a fight

In middle of the night

A lot of blood loss, it was like

Walking through a flood

The sea was red and I was too enraged

and too in love

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hymnagen

You got me feeling some frustration and all I did was read it, Wize #Respect

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Poetunleashed

Remember this feeling of needing clarity

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Kewayne Wadley

I'm speechless. I loved this. The toll and strife of love at its finest. Thanks for sharing

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