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life 1 min read 601 views Apr 18, 2016

To My Love

I heard the crackle
In your voice 
I knew your heart
Was breaking 
Stunned by your cry 
Still I stood 
Hoping and wishing 
To wipe your tears away 
I felt your tears flow
Even though 
I was miles away 
I stand here wishing 
I could keep 
Your tears at bay
I heard that crackle still
I knew your heart 
Was breaking 
Being torn in two 
I stand here speechless
Words lost to me 
Stunned 
I wish I could bring 
You comfort 
wishing 
I could ease your pain 
But here I stand 
Telling to hold on 
Wipe away your tears 
Know my love 
Transcends this distance 
Dry your eyes 
I stand here wishing 
I could take away your tears 
 

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Corey

A special connection that transcends distance. I can definitely relate to this expression. Nicely written, Poetunleashed!

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Poetunleashed

Coret, thank you for your kind words...

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Woven

The love was still felt even through the miles, I'm sure. This was quite heartfelt, and like Corey, I can certainly relate. Wonderfully expressed.

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Poetunleashed

Woven thank you for your kind words

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LyricalMorphine

I'm sad now i hate tears and cries from someone i love but the way you captured it was like something beautiful

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Poetunleashed

LyricalMorphine thank you for your kind words

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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