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life 1 min read 584 views Apr 25, 2016

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is this real touched by it all still can't feel the storm hungover the land rain poured as though it was from someone's hand rain came down along with flashing lights and Thundurus clouds beating the ground so loud, we were running from the water stranded and stuck somewhere downtown like running through New Orleans, where shots rung out, shouts, get out of the boat and drown That's how it went down like the Titanic, a plane flew over the Atlantic, then suddenly appeared a rainbow, purple rain fell from the sky then it stopped and the sun began to shine again, opened our eyes and no one was blind again

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TIGHT....thanks for sharing! ONE

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