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life 1 min read 646 views May 3, 2016

Brand new

When people went to acting brand new I was one of a few Who remained true Remained me ain't no changing me No chains on me No slavery I won't be you I won't be y'all No stallin No faking no fraud Long as my family good I'm great Grandma said you could never be a fool if you learn from your mistakes So I'm watching mine Watching me Still legit when ish is bleak Tempers raised One vs three Watch I emerge like Hercules Ain't no hurting me Have you screaming MERCY PLEASE!!!

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Woven

Sometimes situations can influence a person to act other than themselves in reaction, but this piece speaks to being true to self no matter. I applaud you on that.

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The Immortal Wize

There is always a reaction to an action, a peaceful stance is always the loudest...I hear you!

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