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Hsanan
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Through poetry I have told the stories of my soul, as the universe, I am, and always will be. My soul expands once more, for I am fed the sacred fruit of knowledge, and love by my brothers, and sisters. Grasp my articulation, and reveal to me your soul, it is then you will see our souls are one. To know you is to know my lost self. To love you is to love the whole of my self. I have seen the seasons of your sorrow, and the precessions of your joy. I am truly blessed.

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When My Lust Was Born

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When my Lust was born

I gave in to her every call

Faded was her face.

A blurred image of pure black.

None can take from her eternal beauty.

with thighs of pleasurable strength

she tempts my soul and my mind.

never touching my lips she leans forth 

asking for my submission.

She holds my attention,

and I bend to her every will.

Obedient I am to her,

for I am weak.

When my lust was born 

a drunken man I then became.

Her body was as a sensual shadow,

forever leading me towards the path of regret.

What a beautiful countenance she had.

Transparent emotions of pure Black,

but what do i know,

I was a foolish, blind, and drunken man.

Feeling on a temptress of my deepest desire,

but what do I know 

I was a drunken man,

and moments after I rose to find it was all a dream.

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Corey says:

Hello Hsanan, I enjoyed this piece, especially the unexpected ending! Nice write!

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Hsanan says:

Thank you very much.

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