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life 1 min read 611 views May 4, 2016

Swoop

Keep your vision to yourself

Don't tell no one else

Do that and you, told on yourself

Here's a rule of thumb

Don't be blind and that dumb

The time has not come

Just be still and it will

No matter how it may look or how it may feel

You are still here, coz of Gods will

Keep watch from the hill

Renew your bill

Wait for plucked feathers to heal

When time comes and it will

Mount up and go in for the kill

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