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life 1 min read 680 views May 18, 2016

A Stranger she misses

She laid eyes on him 
Her heart raced
Running for the mountains 
Fuelled with joy 
And excitement 
She contemplated her fate
How
Would she initiate 
This romance budding 
In her heard 
With this stranger 
Who just stole her heart 
Without uttering a single 
WORD
Pondering 
Notions 
And contemplating 
Scenarios 
In her mind 
She had gazed upon 
Perfection 
And beauty 
Only bestowed 
For special souls
Still
she stood 
Her feet remained
Motionless
While her mind 
Began to recall 
How to walk 
Yet she remained 
Motionless
Ages seemed to pass
Her eyes glued 
To this being 
Which channelled 
All she had 
All she was 
Towards him 
All this while remaining
Still
Time had froze for her
But not for the stranger
Who zipped past her 
Leaving her in 
Awe 
Of the beauty
She had witnessed 
Come into her life
Steal her heart
And escape 
In a matter of seconds 
And vanish 
To the world in which he came
 

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hymnagen

I got a thing for works of adoration. Enjoyed this read

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love_supreme

This is an excellent write.

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poetunleashed

hymnagen, glad you enjoyed it thank you

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poetunleashed

latin_lover thank you for your comment

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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