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The Immortal Wize

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If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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 I visited a few places in my life

never one like this have I known before

everyone wanted to give me a hug

a few wanted a kiss

I told them, I did not approve of this

none of them would hear of it

" what kind of craziness is this?"

I thought to myself

I rather be somewhere else

the place I've been

I had no friends

I knocked on doors

no one let me in

everywhere I went

 I was turned away

so, even though, I don't like this place

I think I'm going to stay

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hymnagen says:

Wize, I don't know what you meant to convey, but I know what this made me feel...my own blackness. You can get so used to folks treating you wrong, your hackles rise when you get treated right for a change. Digz this piece!

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Woven says:

Being treated kindly can feel foreign when it's not commonplace, such sadness in that but it's true. We tend to shy away from the unfamiliar, but kindness we can warm up to once we trust it. Thought provoking, well written expression. Congratulations on your win in May's poetry contest.
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Corey says:

This feels like it could be either side of the coin and up to the reader's imagination or personal experience where it lands. I used my imagination and it was an interesting ride. Nice piece! Congratulations on your win!!

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