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life 1 min read 610 views May 20, 2016

Curve

I'm looking at you like

you're going to save me

you're looking at me

as if I'm going to save you

what's wrong, has your angel

falling off the ladder

so you're here crying

stopped trying to climb

what is it up there

that you're trying to find

super heroes always finish last

suffering never pass

how can I teach you

how to fly, when I fry

getting too close to the sun

already done, burned once

looking at it from where I stand

looks like somebody lied

again about something

 

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LP45

Great work as always wizedom.

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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