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life 1 min read 748 views May 23, 2016

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Why

Every time

I fall

In

Love

It’s with a

Falling angel

Always love

From the start

Then I

Feel torn apart

Looking like I

Ain’t been fed

Energy drained

Bled

Cast down

Left

For

Dead

Forgive me father

For I have sinned

Again

Thought

She was a

Friend

Seen my life

Coming to an

End

This place I’m in

Feels strange

I see fire no flames

Don’t feel a thing

Thought angels had

Wings but I see

Fangs

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RonnieL

Okay.....like this...hot! Like the word play.

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