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life 1 min read 659 views May 25, 2016

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this foundation is made of brick

if we're going to escape we better do it quick

fast in the hurry like the mouse Scurry

looking for cheese in all the stations

in a haste there's no time to be patient

suffering way too long for waiting

move like you're in a race to win

as if your life depends and it does

those who are trying not to go to hell

are pawns on a square, better get out

the way of those who already been there

indigos since embryos goodness inside

like Oreos free spirits with ears to hear it

various colors like Skittles see through

the eye in the middle star child straight

off the mother ship, been on earth since birth

supernatural no special effects here to connect

the dots see through robots kill zombies

on the spot sending them back home to their mummies

careful to not deceive, only the chosen are the seeds

 

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