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life 1 min read 575 views May 25, 2016

Glitz

Why is it always a friend who survived

Go to the hospital still alive, and then you die

Can’t stop the flow from your mothers eyes

Everyone knows it’s no surprise in their disguise

been done like the words been heard a dozen times

how many rounds does it take to lay ‘em down

only one if it’s in the crown,  heard the sound

of a 1000 rounds being shot into the ground

no media attention, ever hardly mentioned

too many fools playing gang bang, until they

run up on the real thing, hit by the violence

that they claim to idol, I don’t know why tho

too much time being spent on silent moments

perpetrators hiding somewhere on an island

stop believing everything,  everyone who has lips

don’t kiss pinky rings

 

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hymnagen

A reality check fo' real, but how do we get those who need these words to see these words? #Respect

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