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life 1 min read 560 views Jun 7, 2016

Finishes’

there’s a hole in the wall

the walls about to fall

who’s going to make that call

who’s going to take a stand

wake up the maintenance man

who going to hold the ladder

take it from his hands

prepare for the climb over

standout like a comb over

one at a time next in line

who will decide to stay back

left on the other side

allowing others to go first

move forward, who has that

kind of heart, who will take

the nails in their hand

while still holding

the banner stained in blood up

I see in 3D don’t ask me why

No 3rd degree, there is only one

Eye I see what is happening

The wall will fall and rise again

 

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