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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Daggers

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Who is the devil

Who is he really?

Is the devil in all enemies

The devil can be seen in

Jealousy and envy

Two of the most deadliest energies

Attracting attacking their victims

Slowly causing injuries by fatal blows

Thrown sometimes by those you know

Even death to those who are potential prey

Although you may know we have been

  Hit by a stray arrow, do we not know

 Who holds the bow

really?

 

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love_supreme says:

Nice.

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Woven says:

"Jealousy and envy...Two of the most deadliest energies" Yes, definitely! The hate stemming from these energies is the devil personified. This piece had the impact of a dagger, intense write!

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love_supreme says:

I like this poem.

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