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life 1 min read 655 views Jun 7, 2016

Weepy

I guess you were the air I breathed

When you left I started to wheeze

I felt my heart palpitating

Tossed and turned contemplating

On what to do without you

You must be the goddess of air

 Coz, I find it hard to just breathe

Without you there, come back to me

I need the air that you breathed in me

Your arms wrapped around so tightly

I need your kisses to comfort me nightly

I’m falling apart, every day I fall away

 There are too many pieces to my heart

Though I now... stand alone I vow

To breathe on my own still it feels wrong

I might sound weak but I'm still strong

Checking my consciousness for weak links

still I think, the essence of you completes me

 

 

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