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romance 2 min read 564 views Jun 7, 2016

hold on tight

I've been deeply scarred, hardened by night
I must admit, yeah, she brought me the light....

I hold on tight, for fear of losing you
I replace my heart so there is room for you
Better yet, I replaced my heart so I could give you something new
And that space in my heart is where our planted seed grew

I hold on tight, because how else do I breathe
I give my lungs since you are every single breath for me
Dont ever let go for that moment would be the very death of me
Just want you to know, you are the only air I will ever need

I hold on tight, because without you I am weak
Mentality, emotionally, physically, spiritually you are my strength 
With you next to me, I can conquer anything
And honestly, even past the death of me, I will defend everything that is you and me

I hold on tight, for you are my sanity
I give you my mind simply because you can handle me
Only you can silence my mental demons
Only you can bring peace and calm when life is drowning me

Thank you, there is no place I’d rather be
This is me giving you all of me

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twistedbeauty

i love this poem. keep writing.

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RonnieL

AYE BRUH.....LOVE THIS! THE WORDS...MESSAGE...FLOW...REAL NICE!

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