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I saw the American flag laid out on the floor like a rag

I said to myself,  “that looks bad”

I saw a train derail, people tossed about

I said to myself, “that looks bad”

I saw a lady holding a baby with a toddler on each leg

I said to myself, “that looks bad”

I saw a man on Kush, in a pose on the side of the road

I said to myself, “that looks bad”

I saw a man hit a women with a backhand, it sounded so loud when she cried out

I said to myself, “that looks bad

I saw a body burned to ash, laying in a pile of trash

I said to myself, “that looks bad”

I saw a boy hanging on a gate, wearing a red doo rag, wrapped around his neck was a blue rag

I said to myself, “that looks bad”

I saw a preacher one night, kissing on a woman who wasn’t his wife

I said to myself, “that looks bad”

Through all of my walkabout I could not find one thing good to talk to myself about

 

 

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jtj1982 says:

You are "spot on" about what not only looks bad in our country but what IS BAD in not only our country but in this great big world. You are a very passionate author.

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