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life 1 min read 644 views Jun 19, 2016

Escaping Madness

what would a man do

if he were not made to do

what he does

who's voice, does the man listen too

why is one man evil

why is another man good

the confused are never understood

like standing up in mismatched shoes

an act that only makes sense to

1, 2 and 3 year olds

the bigest problem with adults

is, we're too old

yet still not as wise as a child

who's mind is on their own business

because there's an empty carboard box

that they want to get inside of

gripping an imaginary wood wheel

"vroom, vroom" driving across the living room floor

the anoying sound that wakes, unleashing the beast

to assist and cease, taking away all childhood fantasies

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Wow, this is awesome.

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hymnagen

The insight in this piece is so plain it can be missed by adult eyes, too. Brilliance, Wize-Dom #RealTalk

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