“In the clouds”

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life 1 min read 630 views Jul 5, 2016

No Mas Por Favor

Im fed up 
not talking with a spoon
life full of darkness 
hope sun comes through
really need saving 
hope the son comes too
what to do
when the devil got a hold on you
tell you what
evil won 
the first battle with ease
i didnt run
aint no traveling seas
I stood tough
whether it was a win or defeat
Im a warrior my heart cant be weakened
my soul unbeaten
everywhere i go
they assume i'm a demon
the leeches leech me
feeding externally from my internal bleeding
eating my flesh
consuming my essence
deleting my presence
in hopes (I) 
the lyric legend
wont spread his message

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hymnagen

One for the haters, huh? Tight

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WarriorCarryingWater

Dope!

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2b2b2

Great Work, thanks for sharing!

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Ak Rio

thanx I really appreciate the feedback

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Excellent write

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