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Trying to keep you safe..
If the police pull you over, do what they say
And when Black lives comply and do what they say
They kill Black lives any way

Can fear be killed?
Can the death sentence be placed on ignorance?
Can't make logical the illogical
Can't make sense out of complete nonsense

ALL lives DON'T matter to everyone
Go and hashtag that
Shoot you if you tell them you are getting your wallet
Shoot you with a knee in your back laying down flat

Too many beautiful shades of brown
being splattered by too much red
Police disregarding Black life
Shooting in such a way, to make sure Black lives... are dead

And the bullets fly
And the tears flow
Some ask why
The answers don't seem to matter 
as much
Since their lives didn't matter
to those who swore to serve and protect
It's gotten so that blood death and denial
is what we have come to expect
As once again, we say their names...
Alton Sterling
Philando Castile
 

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Ain't nothing but the in such a magnificent and creative way, this piece explains their evil intent plain as day... Thank you for sharing this as words of proof, authenticity, and Truth will ignite the passions of others to speak up and so something..
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Kingqadardwon' says:

Ain't nothing but the Truth in such a magnificent and creative way, this piece explains their evil intent plain as day... Thank you for sharing this as words of proof, authenticity, and Truth will ignite the passions of others to speak up and so something..
 

Poetiq1der says:

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...As a fellow Artist and writer I can appreciate when an Artist uses Poetry effectively to articulate their feelings. I have respect for the way the way you weaved this tale without sounding hateful...Your meter was great, composition flawless, and message on point...Be Faithful and Blessed/1 Love
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Real talk... When/how will it end? I don't want my daughter to grow to be my age and have deal with the same madness....
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2b2b2 says:

Write On... It was once smoldering, then there was smoke, now it's a fire, thanks for sharing, most relevant!
 

scash102 says:

Amen

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Woven says:

Kingqadardwon' I thank you for such kind words just had to put thoughts to paper as others have felt the need to express. Very much appreciated!

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Woven says:

Poetiq1der I such a wonderful compliment. I awoke that morning yearning to put pen to paper in some way. Thank you kindly, blessings to you as well.

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Woven says:

Nosajm yes we all want it to end peacefully especially for our children. Thank you.

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Woven says:

An inferno 2b2b2, I thank you for commenting so.

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Woven says:

Scash 102, yes indeed, thank you.
 

RonnieL says:

Real Thoughts...Real Words...For Real life situations played out in front of our eyes. NO RESPECT FOR US PERIOD! Very creative piece of expression. Thank you

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Woven says:

The forceful impact of reality, I thank you for your comments RonnieL, much appreciated.

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