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Hushed

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In silence 
we
as lovers 
be 
quiet...as our auras
wave, merging into aqua sea
Silently
the current becomes still
with turquoise tranquility
Whilst the moon beams
brightly
shielding the sea's surface
gallantly
As the golden veil drapes
translucently
The waters lie still
In silence 
we
as lovers 
be
at peace 

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love_supreme says:

Wow, people are really sleeping on this one. Excellent write.

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hymnagen says:

Short but packed full of beautiful imagery. I like!
 

RonnieL says:

Tranquil...Peaceful...Beautiful... great imagery!

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corey says:

Omg Woven, your words painted such a beautiful and captivating expression! I loved it! You rocked this, well done!
 

Woven says:

Latin_lover, I thank you for such a kind response, much appreciated.

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Woven says:

An interlude. Glad you appreciate the imagery, as I appreciate your response. Thank you much.

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Woven says:

Apologies the above comment was for hymnagen...wish I could edit...
 

Woven says:

Glad the imagery impressed you so, thank you Ronnie, I appreciate your kind comment.

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Woven says:

Corey, quite humbled that you felt this way about my brush, as you are quite a talented scribe. Thank you very much.
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Coalhouse says:

nice.

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