“Feelin Hopeful”

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life 1 min read 756 views Jul 11, 2016

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In search of a new beginning, a way out, an escape.

Physical signs of anxiety as the hairs rise upon the back of my nape.

Change is so close, so near, so dear to me.

I get lost in fantasy as I fantasize of how great things will be.

No longer a mental movie as my motion picture becomes reality.

Striving pushing forward from an immature mentality.

Self detructive, mutilating, brutality

Blinded by hurt and pain, enough for insanity

Sight with new eyes, new light, new amity.

A rebirth, redesign, recreation from past calamity.

It will only get better.....My appreciation for growth.

Persist, prevail, provide abundant hope!

 

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Florray~

My first poem for the Vibe! I hope everyone enjoys! Just something quick while I had some free time at work.

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Kingqadardwon'

This is an excellent write! This piece is inspiring and it's full of hope, shining bright in the midst of the world that we currently live in. Welcome to the vibe and thanks for sharing...

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Florray~

@Kingqadardwon'......Thank you very much for your positive response! I have so many more....Just wanted to at least post something to get started!!!

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love_supreme

I loved this poem and the last line should be a mantra "Persist, prevail, provide abundant hope!"

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Florray~

@ Latin_lover....Just would like to thank you also for your kind and encouraging words! Be on the look out for much more! Have a good day!

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QueenJ

Wowwwww, this poem was phenamenal, please keep sharing with us!

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WarriorCarryingWater

Dope flow and message!

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Florray~

Thank you guys!! Again...I truly appreciate it! Definite motivation to get more of my poems on here. I have so many from years back.. I will keep posting and dating them! Thanks!

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Florray~

Thank you guys!! Again...I truly appreciate it! Definite motivation to get more of my poems on here. I have so many from years back.. I will keep posting and dating them! Thanks!

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SMusinga

Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. Bravo!!

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after vision

my poet, I have been searching for a site that would feed my poetic need and charge my pen to write it's soul. poets such as yourself have found a way without knowing to ring the bell that I must answer. thank you

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love_supreme

Very nice

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