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life 1 min read 610 views Jul 14, 2016

Whisking

When Freedom comes

She will not find me on the highway

Holding up a thumb, holding up a sign

That reads, I will work for crumbs

 

When Freedom comes

I will be on time for my appointment

She will not be disappointed

 

I will break through the bounds

I will not let her down

 

When Freedom comes

I will strike fear, I will be prepared

I will not be scared

 

When Freedom comes

With every breath I take

I will rest and stay awake

 

Eyes wide open, never shut

Open to receiving victoriously

Hoping for heaven’s sake

I’ll still be here to see that day

 

If not, Freedom will come anyway

 

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