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Love ends distrust begins

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Blood lines 
End
Souls cruising 
Down rivers 
Of hate 
And envy 
Lies
Laying 
Down rules 
Which make us 
Seem like fools 
Foolishly
Erecting 
Momumental 
Relationships 
Which trust betrays 
 
We gaze 
Pondering 
Each others fate
Walk on shells
Destined 
To detonate  
Proclaim that 
Love 
Resides
In our hearts 
Yet blood lines 
End 
Replaced by 
Insecurities 
Fake smiles 
Which cover up
Where hate begins 
To pump
Fear and doubt 
Into blood streams 
 

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after vision says:

my poet, I have lived this life and understand the source of this ink. document every emotion - it will become some of your best poetry

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RonnieL says:

Blown away! Dope...Deep...Descriptive Excellent piece!

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poetunleashed says:

after vision: thank you for the motivational comment
 

poetunleashed says:

RonnieL: thank you very much

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