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life 1 min read 611 views Jul 28, 2016

Love ends distrust begins

Blood lines 
End
Souls cruising 
Down rivers 
Of hate 
And envy 
Lies
Laying 
Down rules 
Which make us 
Seem like fools 
Foolishly
Erecting 
Momumental 
Relationships 
Which trust betrays 
 
We gaze 
Pondering 
Each others fate
Walk on shells
Destined 
To detonate  
Proclaim that 
Love 
Resides
In our hearts 
Yet blood lines 
End 
Replaced by 
Insecurities 
Fake smiles 
Which cover up
Where hate begins 
To pump
Fear and doubt 
Into blood streams 
 

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after vision

my poet, I have lived this life and understand the source of this ink. document every emotion - it will become some of your best poetry

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RonnieL

Blown away! Dope...Deep...Descriptive Excellent piece!

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poetunleashed

after vision: thank you for the motivational comment

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poetunleashed

RonnieL: thank you very much

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love_supreme

Very nice

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