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just different 1 min read 512 views Aug 1, 2016

unfinished

This is more than just write, ya better listen close

I thought you would get it light, nah Skipped it how you chose

I ain't lie if I say I know it right, sometimes i judge false

How could i possibly might, I think what your mind echos 

Another pony thinking horse

Oh just go ahead let's count all yo h*"es

Thats what matters the most

Even if it tucks your heart you will stop at no no's

But baby its that time, its your loss

There's no damn kiss in the pause

Run that sh*t I know they taste lies

Allow me to cut ties

I am getting good at these bye's

Don't I look different in the eyes

sad for me & nice for we

if they cried for this twice

Giddy now I spit your motor price

Ashes to ashes see as the old me dies

Seven days and seven nights

Been trying to reach my heights

Come with help me help you turn our sights

If you can keep going ,always ends to starts

Water can break these rocks

If it ran over it enough times

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AFter vision

my poet, water can break rocks and reshape rocks and river beds. thank you

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love_supreme

I loved this one. Excellent write.

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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