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life 1 min read 633 views Aug 4, 2016

A kiss we shared

I remember

The first time

I kissed you

My heart

Pounding

Trying to escape

This prison

I call a chest

My mind

Recklessly

Stumbling

Over the notion

I was contemplating

Kissing you

I never knew

That butterflies

Made stomachs

Their play ground

Until I thought of

Kissing you

We walked

Mesmerized

By conversations

That were never

Imprinted in mind

So I can never

Tell you

What you said

What comes to mind

Is how the stars

Laid witness

To a moment

Our hearts met

Intertwined

And entangled

That moment

We got lost

In each other

 

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after vision

my poet, we have all known this feeling, but you captured it so well - takes me back to when love was true and innocent

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RonnieL

Wonderful!

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poetunleashed

after vision: thank you RonnieL: thank you glad you both could drop a comment

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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