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life 1 min read 583 views Aug 4, 2016

Water to Wine

when you left you shifted my atmosphere

I lost my foundation and fell to the bottom

of the situation, got back up without hesitation

picking you up and tossing you to the back of my mind

I never wanted to look at the clock and see the time

that you're not there, so I always kept you with me

like my cell phone and my keys

hoping you wouldn't mind the ties, I bind you with

in certain situations, I feel you cutting off my circulation

dizzy and feeling faint, I feel like I just can't

hold off the restraints, knowing I must cut my loss

I don't want to watch you bleed and die on me again

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after vision

my poet, stages of the heart as it drains and fills back up

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