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dream of my love
the reflection of my heart
passion from my soul set free
my light bursting into flames
laughter in this game
open up your joy
maze of life
fun living with you
the good things
sweet treats of success
see beauty through travel
fearless adventure
always see the best
others lack
friends of the loneliest
be who you love to know
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my poet, so much said here today. I was that friend of the be-friended and over my life time it has paid off. thanks
Read after vision's poemskavindra
I am happy it means something after all that is why I write to induce a thought producing revelation! Thank you too I needed to hear encouragement today ! many blessings :)
Read kavindra's poemsRonnieL
Very heartfelt write!
Read RonnieL's poemslove_supreme
I agree that this is an excellent heart felt write.
Read love_supreme's poemsWarriorCarryingWater
Dope!
Read WarriorCarryingWater's poemshymnagen
Thank you for sharing this uplifting work. A joy to read!
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